The old
haunted house
Once upon a
time a little boy called Mark was going to move in to a big old house
in Scotland with his family. Mark was bullied in the school and the
only way to stop it was to move. On there way to Scotland a heavy
storm was closing in. The storm was the worst storm about 40 years.
It was foggy, thunder, and raining at the same time. The family was
frightened and decided to drive faster so they can be safe faster.
When the family step't into the first room Mark feel that something
was wrong, he feel someones presence and it was not his father or his
mother. But he say to her self to take that thought away and just
relax.
When Mark was
going to sleep can he feel someones presence. He herd crows outside
and the weather was still bad. He herd a wolf that was shouting to
the moon. He started to feel very nervous, he feel that something
was't right. Suddenly the windows open and it started to get foggy in
Marks room. Now was Mark very afraid, he just laid in his bed and
shaking like a leaf. Just when it was worst he started to see a light
in the foggy room. The light get closer, closer, and closer. Mark was
very terrifying. He feel a chilling wind just when a decapitated man
whit black clothes and whit a bag on his shoulder arrived to the beed
whit the light in his hand. Mark started to scream uncontrollably but
the man stop it to take his hand in front of Marks mouth. The man
said to Mark:
- If you not do what I want you to do I will kill you. And I want you to kill your mother or father. And remember if you not do it I will kill you.
- If you not do what I want you to do I will kill you. And I want you to kill your mother or father. And remember if you not do it I will kill you.
Suddenly the
man just disappeared and the fog too. Mark was scared stiff. He was
so frightened that he fall in sleep. When he wake up he feel a
strange feeling in his hole body. He told his parents what he has
been through. The parents told Mark that it was just a nightmare.
That day Mark just think about what he has been through last night.
When he came home from school he feel that some one stalked him all
the time. Evan if he was going to the bathroom can he feel someones
presence.
Mark thinks
about what the man said last night. He don't want to be killed but he
don't want to kill his father or mother either. He decided to not do
anything and wait to the night and see what happens.
When the night
falls he said to his parents that he want them to sleep in his room
and the parent says.
- Okey
- Okey
And just when the parents fall in sleep the window opens and the room started to get foggy just like yesterday, a storm was closing in just like yesterday. Mark though it was so creepy and wake his parents up. The parents been horrified when they se the fog and heard the storm outside.
They all think
it would be beast if they close the window and spent the night in the
parents bedroom. Just when they was going they started to see the
light in the fog. Mark started to scream uncontrollably and the
parents was scared stiff. The light came closer, and closer, and
closer. The decapitated man arrived and this time he said.
- Mark, you have not do want I wanted you to do. And if you remember what I said to you last night are I'm going to kill you right now. But i'm not going to do it at the easy way.
- Mark, you have not do want I wanted you to do. And if you remember what I said to you last night are I'm going to kill you right now. But i'm not going to do it at the easy way.
The man take of
his bag from his shoulders and from the bag he takes a head and put
it on is body. The man started to bite Mark's parents who just stand
there and was so frightened. It was so bloddy and Mark started to
cry. He freaking out and jump on the man and try to stop it but it
was to late. His parents was dead. The man go to Mark who was laying
in a corner. The man said.
- God night Mark.
- God night Mark.
And then he
kill'd Mark whit his mouth and the family just rotting slowly away
and that was the story of ''The old haunted house''
Made by Daniel
Stehnsson 8B
The idea was great and it was easy to understand everything.
SvaraRaderaYou described very well and you had very many scary story words.
A good part:
"Mark thinks about what the man said last night. He don't want to be killed but he don't want to kill his father or mother either. He decided to not do anything and wait to the night and see what happens"
Think about.
You should double check the spelling :)
Check Unikum:)
SvaraRadera