Hello Oliver!
How are you today? My name
is Daniel Stehnsson and I live in Ullared, Sweden. I read a book
about you and I thought it would be fun to whrite a letter to you. As
I told you I live in Sweden, the 21 century. I live in a rich village
and we have the largest department store in Scandinavia. How is it
where you live, when I read the book I read that you was an orphan
and worked in a workhouse and then you moved to London and started to
be a thief for Mr.Fagin. How do you live today? Do you still live
with Mr.Brownlow? How is you best friend? Have you still dont get
cars to your town? Where I live almost every adult have there own
car. I live in a small village but I thinks that nice because every
one know each others and I thinks that it's good to grow up in that
kind of village. Every one going to school from that you are 6 years
old to you are 15 and if you want you can keep on study 3 more years.
It would be nice to meet you
sometime and heard the hole story about your life, I have so many
questions to ask you!
I wish you good luck/ Daniel
I've read your letter, Daniel! I like your ending. Imagine meeting Oliver Twist. I think he would have a lot to tell us.
SvaraRaderaCould you please try and correct these two sentences:
Are you still live with Mr.Brownlow?
Have you still did't get cars to your town?