fredag 9 november 2012

My scary story


The old haunted house

Once upon a time a little boy called Mark was going to move in to a big old house in Scotland with his family. Mark was bullied in the school and the only way to stop it was to move. On there way to Scotland a heavy storm was closing in. The storm was the worst storm about 40 years. It was foggy, thunder, and raining at the same time. The family was frightened and decided to drive faster so they can be safe faster. When the family step't into the first room Mark feel that something was wrong, he feel someones presence and it was not his father or his mother. But he say to her self to take that thought away and just relax.

When Mark was going to sleep can he feel someones presence. He herd crows outside and the weather was still bad. He herd a wolf that was shouting to the moon. He started to feel very nervous, he feel that something was't right. Suddenly the windows open and it started to get foggy in Marks room. Now was Mark very afraid, he just laid in his bed and shaking like a leaf. Just when it was worst he started to see a light in the foggy room. The light get closer, closer, and closer. Mark was very terrifying. He feel a chilling wind just when a decapitated man whit black clothes and whit a bag on his shoulder arrived to the beed whit the light in his hand. Mark started to scream uncontrollably but the man stop it to take his hand in front of Marks mouth. The man said to Mark:
- If you not do what I want you to do I will kill you. And I want you to kill your mother or father. And remember if you not do it I will kill you.

Suddenly the man just disappeared and the fog too. Mark was scared stiff. He was so frightened that he fall in sleep. When he wake up he feel a strange feeling in his hole body. He told his parents what he has been through. The parents told Mark that it was just a nightmare. That day Mark just think about what he has been through last night. When he came home from school he feel that some one stalked him all the time. Evan if he was going to the bathroom can he feel someones presence.

Mark thinks about what the man said last night. He don't want to be killed but he don't want to kill his father or mother either. He decided to not do anything and wait to the night and see what happens.

When the night falls he said to his parents that he want them to sleep in his room and the parent says.
 - Okey

And just when the parents fall in sleep the window opens and the room started to get foggy just like yesterday, a storm was closing in just like yesterday. Mark though it was so creepy and wake his parents up. The parents been horrified when they se the fog and heard the storm outside.
They all think it would be beast if they close the window and spent the night in the parents bedroom. Just when they was going they started to see the light in the fog. Mark started to scream uncontrollably and the parents was scared stiff. The light came closer, and closer, and closer. The decapitated man arrived and this time he said.
- Mark, you have not do want I wanted you to do. And if you remember what I said to you last night are I'm going to kill you right now. But i'm not going to do it at the easy way.

The man take of his bag from his shoulders and from the bag he takes a head and put it on is body. The man started to bite Mark's parents who just stand there and was so frightened. It was so bloddy and Mark started to cry. He freaking out and jump on the man and try to stop it but it was to late. His parents was dead. The man go to Mark who was laying in a corner. The man said.
- God night Mark.

And then he kill'd Mark whit his mouth and the family just rotting slowly away and that was the story of ''The old haunted house''





Made by Daniel Stehnsson 8B 

2 kommentarer:

  1. The idea was great and it was easy to understand everything.
    You described very well and you had very many scary story words.

    A good part:

    "Mark thinks about what the man said last night. He don't want to be killed but he don't want to kill his father or mother either. He decided to not do anything and wait to the night and see what happens"

    Think about.

    You should double check the spelling :)

    SvaraRadera